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On Your Porch |
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Jesus Christ |
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On Your Porch
I was on your porch, the smoke sank into my skin
so i came inside to be with you
and we talked all night, about everything We could imagine
cause come the morning ill be gone
and as our eyes start to close
i turn to you and i let you know
that i Love you
well my dad was sick
and my mom she cared for him
her love it nursed him back to life
and me i ran,
i couldnt even look at him
for fear id have to say goodbye
and as i start to leave
he grabs me by the shoulder and he tells me
"whats left to loose,
you've done enough...
and if you fail well then you fail but not to us
cause these last three years,
i know they've been hard...
but now its time to get out of the desert and into the sun
even if its alone
so now here i sit,
in a hotel off of Sunset
my thoughts bounce off of sams guitar
and thats the way its been,
ever since we were kids but now,
now weve got something to prove and i,
i can see there eyes
but tell me something,
can they see mine
cause whats left to loose,
ive done enough
and if i fail well then i fail but i gave it a shot
and these last three years,
i know they've been hard
but now its time to get out of the desert and into the sun
even if its alone
i was on your porch last nite,
the smoke it sank into my skin
| On July 13th 2007 blahanablah Said : | |
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i love that song!
although i doubt you wrote it. |
| On January 27th 2007 ralicia Said : | |
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Very good! I like it alot |
| On January 7th 2007 ShelbyMJ Said : | |
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its the format... you didnt write it. |
| On December 29th 2006 KickinVic111 Said : | |
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this poem was awesome you should out the song i wrote it is called " I Guess Not" |
| On December 22nd 2006 pro3238 Said : | |
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can you say FAGGOT! |
| On December 4th 2006 lilith312p Said : | |
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i really like this poem..... |
| On December 2nd 2006 pinkbubbletee Said : | |
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omgsh that is good
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