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On Your Porch

Views (253) Passion Created on 11-30-06 Flag

I was on your porch, the smoke sank into my skin

 so i came inside to be with you

 and we talked all night, about everything We could imagine

cause come the morning ill be gone

and as our eyes start to close

 i turn to you and i let you know

that i Love you

 well my dad was sick

and my mom she cared for him

her love it nursed him back to life

and me i ran,

i couldnt even look at him

for fear id have to say goodbye

 and as i start to leave

 he grabs me by the shoulder and he tells me

"whats left to loose,

you've done enough...

and if you fail well then you fail but not to us

cause these last three years,

i know they've been hard...

but now its time to get out of the desert and into the sun

even if its alone

 so now here i sit,

in a hotel off of Sunset

my thoughts bounce off of sams guitar

and thats the way its been,

ever since we were kids but now,

now weve got something to prove and i,

i can see there eyes

 but tell me something,

can they see mine

cause whats left to loose,

ive done enough

and if i fail well then i fail but i gave it a shot

and these last three years,

 i know they've been hard

but now its time to get out of the desert and into the sun

even if its alone

 i was on your porch last nite,

the smoke it sank into my skin

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On July 13th 2007 blahanablah Said :
blahanablah i love that song! although i doubt you wrote it.
On January 27th 2007 ralicia Said :
ralicia Very good! I like it alot
On January 7th 2007 ShelbyMJ Said :
ShelbyMJ its the format... you didnt write it.
On December 29th 2006 KickinVic111 Said :
KickinVic111 this poem was awesome you should out the song i wrote it is called " I Guess Not"
On December 22nd 2006 pro3238 Said :
my picture
can you say FAGGOT!
On December 4th 2006 lilith312p Said :
lilith312p i really like this poem.....
On December 2nd 2006 pinkbubbletee Said :
pinkbubbletee omgsh that is good