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I wrote this after a relationship ended

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They Can Make Heros Normal Too

Views (26) Passion Created on 5-16-08 Flag
Hush,don't say a word,
because it's only words and nothing more.
It's nothing I haven't heard
but all the same they make my heart soar.
Words can lift you,kill you,
yet they pour so sweetly from your lips.
They can make heros normal too.
They can bring you down to this.



I feel you whisper in my ear
and your deep laughter echos through my body.
How do you know what I'm just dying to hear?
It's the words that bring me ot my knees.
In the heat of the moment you whispered,"I love you."
and I searched your face for the lie.
I saw something new...
truth was in your eyes.



You smiled at the look on my face
and without hesitation took my hand.
Suddenly every question,every hope was so in place.
You led me into love filled land.
It was love at first sight.
All emotion uttered in a breathless sigh.
The world was brightened by rose colored light
and kisses were as delicate as a butterfly.



There's so many words we could say
but there are thing that mean so much more.
Let's watch the leaving of the day,
because this is what life is for.
I ask,who is there to take my
Because my world's so cold and empty.
I just want out f this godless land.
I need someone to need me.
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On May 19th 2008 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro this is beautiful and descriptive
On May 16th 2008 Yanks19 Said :
Yanks19 this is great gail..you gots some talent.. you must consider writing for a living
On May 16th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 i agreee very nice to read i felt liek i was seeing this
On May 16th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei Well written and it speaks to every reader. I absolutely enjoyed reading this :-)