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No You |
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Step Into |
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Dancing Divinity
Red and yellow covers her body,
Masking the shape of each sensual curve
That swells against the colored cloth.
She’s crossing the dance floor,
Dominating it, making it without a doubt
Known to all there it’s her territory.
A hip sway, a twist of her body,
The song takes a physical form
Through her every passionate move.
All watch, awestruck and hypnotized
By the dancing maelstrom
Taking everyone’s breath and hearts.
Such a dancing divinity as her
Comes around once in a rare time,
Able to make the music more alive,
More vibrant than ever before.
Fiery, feisty brown eyes glint bright
In the flames of the club lights.
No, her hips don’t lie when they show
The amazing woman she really is,
Dancing into the night foreverlong
It’s quite apparent she’s all that exists
In the eyes of the onlookers
And in the music’s all-encompassing wake.
She is the music.
| On August 26th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Ooah this is amazing! It's got a cool beat to it. lol Keep up the great work! :) |
| On August 26th 2008 sixtiespixie Said : | |
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This is lovely. I really love your style~ |
| On August 26th 2008 Exavolt1 Said : | |
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Nice Poem! I like it! |
| On August 26th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is beautiful i really like the emotions you put into this it is truly amazing good work on this |
| On August 26th 2008 Calypso32 Said : | |
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Love that song, haha, great poem, rather sultry, wot? haha, Indeed passionate and sensual, Great work once again, (I begin to live in continual amazement at your poetic prowess.) haha Splendid!! |
| On August 26th 2008 LeahLive Said : | |
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thought* |
| On August 26th 2008 LeahLive Said : | |
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Hahaha I though as much. I did enjoy this! Thank you for sharing! |
| On August 26th 2008 GeonnStwci Said : | |
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Was listening to Shakira's song Hips Don't Lie, and thought of... This. :) Enjoy! |


