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it has a lot of turns... it's a storyRate this Poem
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his cry |
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little girl forgotten on that street |
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i left with nothing |
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the dream |
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Sisters for Us all Though Till the End |
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cold world |
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their story |
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her |
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wrong way |
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Our Unbreakable Neverending Love |
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The Sea |
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together we lie |
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is it real? |
cold world
to dream
what's it like
i can't tell anymore
i live in a night mare
my eyes close i see the deaths
the people i couldn't save
i had failed
over and over
they fell one by one
now i'm here
just as they are lost
lost and wants to be loved
but the word love
we show to no one it seems
the wars are everywhere
little or big makes no difference
still in the end some one some where
is dead
there's not way to say how many truly died
and how many have broke down and cried
there is no way that anyone can see
most people are just blinded
blinded by money and greed
but there's so much more...
but as people
they only take what they want not caring who dies
they laugh at the others cries
the world of people is cold
we are just like animals worse
we are monsters
we kill for pleasure
not even always eating it
just killing it to laugh
people are sick
not all i much admit
there is that handful
here to help
here to feel the real world
they are broke
most live the streets
but they are fun
they will help you
they hold your hand
i am one of those people
i watch the world destroy it's self
and i cry everyday
the tears turning into blood
i let people hit me stab me
but it helps them
it let's them feel
and so after they're done
i am satisfied
i may hurt i might almost die
but i helped
it's sad to watch the cold world
so i hug everyone with a frown
smiling saying have a better day
they may slap me or throw me off
but i try
and it's better then join everyone else in this world and cry to die
| On July 23rd 2007 dyingfminside Said : | |
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I LOVE IT!!
YEAH IT IS OFFICAL YOU ROCK!! :) :) |
| On July 23rd 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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Just great. Just great. =) |
| On July 23rd 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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FallingKLove: and I LOVE IT
FallingKLove: :D
FallingKLove: So true
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