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i dedicate this to my sister Morgan!!!!!

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Sisters for Us all Though Till the End

Views (75) Love Created on 7-22-07 Flag
it happened with a blink of an eye
i looked to see you start to cry
i realize this has to be bad

i talk and you tell me
i can't even think
everything has gone wrong

it's all starting to get good
then bam it all just crashes
there seems to be nothing left

everywhere is a dead end
it feels like we can't get through
i grab your hand holding you close

i tell you not to stray
and i will take you the right way
we come to the hard times

and we feel like we should die
but we still pull through
we don't know how we don't know why but we do

we keep going to dead ends.
then we make a new path
no matter the cost we push our way throw

then we hit this forest
i hold you tight
it wasn't normal it looked to a fight

the trees were all dead
the the sky was gray
no matter where we looked

we were the only living things
there wasn't another breath
not one to be found

we made the only sound
to held you tighter
not letting you go

and we started to run
being scared crying out
then i touched a tree

blood covered my hand
we walked where they died
we to their deaths

we saw all the faces
they taunted and tortured
they made us cry

we started wanting death
then i held up your head
looking so shy

i say we can't leave
it's not our time
for we have other to help

others to find
i grab your hand
we run through there fast

and we look at each other
as we pasted
we got through both life and death

hand in hand
no one else needed
no one else can

we help everyone we can
we hold there hands
but still never separate

but now it is time
for we have passed on
all our knowledge to those who care

they will carry on
helping out others
so know we know

we have not failed
and we never can
as long as we walk hand in hand
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On July 22nd 2007 brosbestfrien1 Said :
brosbestfrien1 I really really liked this poem.
On July 22nd 2007 Foxi141 Said :
Foxi141 wow i have a lot of spelling errors sry peeps. i was really upset and didn't care about that when i wrote it hehe. but you get my point in the poem i think
On July 22nd 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z Your sister really is lucky to have such a wonderful caring honest sister like you! :) - Most of my friends' and their sister's are abusive and hateful towards each other. They wouldn't even care if they were crying on the floor. But you and her are there together, crying together and I truly admire this. All the love you have for her is shown in this poem, and I know you have more than you want to express. The love that you have for a sister doesn't ever just rest. I love this message. I honestly do. I love the last line the most. The message of the strength. I wasn't lieing when you said you had a big heart - just look at this :) <33333