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to the girl of my dreamsRate this Poem
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his cry |
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little girl forgotten on that street |
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i left with nothing |
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the dream |
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Sisters for Us all Though Till the End |
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cold world |
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their story |
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her |
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wrong way |
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Our Unbreakable Neverending Love |
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The Sea |
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together we lie |
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is it real? |
together we lie
they told her she couldn't see me
they said it was wrong
they wouldn't let her use the phone
they kept her locked up
there was no way for me to see her
but i never let go
still we started writing
i changed my name to see her
it was all i could do
we would write everyday
every time i got a chance
i'd write her a little letter
we went to different school
making it hard to talk
but we tried anyways
finally i saved enough money
and bought a car
i drove to go see her
quickly we ran away
and i held her in my arms
kissing her lightly
we went to see a movie
then i brought her home
my dad didn't mind
he knew what i was doing
and he thought it was good
he knew we were in love
so we went and lay down
the t.v. on us watching some random shows
i stroke her hair
we both wish this moment could last
and never die
and there forever we could lie
| On August 1st 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I wish I could tell you how I felt about this poem..but it wouldn't do it justice! It's too..I just love it. Great work, Alex =) - And you are NOT getting worse at poetry! This is even better, infact. Why would you think you're worse? |


