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to the girl of my dreams

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together we lie

Views (54) Passion Created on 8-1-07 Flag

they told her she couldn't see me

they said it was wrong

they wouldn't let her use the phone


they kept her locked up

there was no way for me to see her

but i never let go


still we started writing

i changed my name to see her

it was all i could do


we would write everyday

every time i got a chance

i'd write her a little letter


we went to different school

making it hard to talk

but we tried anyways


finally i saved enough money

and bought a car

i drove to go see her


quickly we ran away

and i held her in my arms

kissing her lightly


we went to see a movie

then i brought her home

my dad didn't mind


he knew what i was doing

and he thought it was good

he knew we were in love


so we went and lay down

the t.v. on us watching some random shows

i stroke her hair


we both wish this moment could last

and never die

and there forever we could lie


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On August 1st 2007 numbbbb0z Said :
numbbbb0z I wish I could tell you how I felt about this poem..but it wouldn't do it justice! It's too..I just love it. Great work, Alex =) - And you are NOT getting worse at poetry! This is even better, infact. Why would you think you're worse?