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Bite The Bullet
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Created on 4-6-08
Abandonement and sorrow,
This is it,
There's no tomorrow.
(chorus)Bite the bullet,
Full of lead.
Take that bullet to my head.
Pills can't help me anymore,
To numb this pain,
A pain so pure.
A pain so real(Bite the bullet, the voices say, 'cause tomorrows not gonna be a better day.)
A pain I no lnger will be able to feel(soon)
(chorus)
I won't cry,
'cause I wan't to die(Just let me fucking die!!!!)
Living is over rated.
Yeah, there's no point in going on, when everyone you know is gone.
Yeah, whats the point in going on, when everyone you know is gone?
(chorus)
(spoken)Life is the hardest part..... But suicide is painless!!!
Please Login to post comments| On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said : | |
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audica, the athuor was writting this in the perspective of a person who attempts to commit suicide. At that point, "life is pointless" is a thought that comes to that person's mind.
I like this alot, because it's how many people feel the day they pull the trigger. |
| On April 8th 2008 audica Said : | |
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i like it. but i just think thatr everyone says that life is over rated. why not look at the good in life? i know that everyone has at least laughed once in their life... |
