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Lost in the stars
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Created on 8-14-08
It was my first time being lost.
The stars I saw held my hand
The stars I saw led the way
It was my frist time being loved
The colors blinded me.
The love catered to me.
It was my first time with passion.
The bueaty your soul possesed.
You put me in the heavens.
It ws my first time Knowing what pain really was.
Your actions like a black hole.
Sucking what was there to no longer be.
You left me in the stars.
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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really good word choice, but i think it could have flowed a little better :) |
| On August 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Nice job, I liked this. |
