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These walls
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Created on 8-10-08
These walls that have closed around me.
These Walls that have closed the windows.
These walls that have shut the world out.
Scare me more than ever
Make me wonder why im here.
Force my world into darkness
These walls have shut me down.
As if I had not a drop left.
My tanks are emtpy
These walls have shown me the pain
The loss that can come from them
So lost these walls have made me.
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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I too can relate to this VERY well. love the emotion and frustration. |
| On August 11th 2008 speederspider Said : | |
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very good:) I can relate to the walls thing. I got some of them myself. |
