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Created on 9-2-07
The pains weeps with me.
The Joy sings with me.
The Anger fights with me.
The wind sweeps me from this place.
The earth changes ever so qucikly.
The fire burns inside of me.
The water falls from my eyes.
I refuse to let go.
I refuse to give in.
I refuse to let them win.
The pains weeps with me.
The Joy sings with me.
The Anger fights with me.
The world is around me.
The demon's Inside me.
The Angels hold me.
I refuse to let go.
I refuse to give in.
I refuse to let them win.
Please Login to post comments| On September 12th 2007 RainMarks Said : | |
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Wow.. |
| On September 2nd 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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That's a great poem! the repetitive scheme is amazing! I dont know what kind of title is worthy a poem such as this. Perhaps "I refuse to let them win", or something along those lines because that line is so strong in this poem. |
