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Thrusted into the pain
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Created on 8-7-07
Once again my brain has taken over.
Once again the fear has crept up silently.
The tears of my pain show now more than ever.
My heart once again beats the tune of pain.
I cannot seem to shake my self of this.
I find my self once again in the seeing what could be but knowing it never will happen.
I cannot understand.Her fangs of love peirced deeper than I know.
My trust shatterd.
my heart broken.
My brain has been thrusted into a whirlwind of thoughts.
The lighting of this storm inside of my brain has shown no mercy.
God please Save me from this torment
Please Login to post comments| On August 25th 2007 babycrzzy Said : | |
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i love the imagry i know these feelings they eventually get better |
| On August 7th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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good use of mataphors and imagery. good poem |
