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Part two of untintled.Rate this Poem
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Untitiled part 2
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Created on 8-6-07
I sit here in this daze. As I realize you are really gone.
How could you leave me in this way? Do you have no heart.
How about all those I'll never leave you's or the your the only one for me.
The tears that fall now show me that you really are gone.
I cannot help but wonder why now? This week before we were to be wedded.
Was he really that much better than me? Or was it the fact that it died in you? its not your fault.
If only there were second chances I would throw this life of mine away to spend it with you. But I cannot have you back.
Its time to move on but these walls have no light.
The ceiling is black as night.
I suppose its ok to stay here in this hell of my own.
My mind.
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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wow. |
| On August 22nd 2007 RainMarks Said : | |
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You have an amazing way with your words.. It's a rare gift to be able to put all the pain down in black and white in such a beautiful way.. Especially the first few lines... Really got to me in a way I can't explain. But I'm sure you'll know. |
| On August 7th 2007 melanie2201 Said : | |
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this is so sad :( almost made me cry ;( but still a great poem full of emotions |
