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Created on 8-3-07
It has been seven months to the day since I found out.
You left me in a rage and selfdoubt.
You called me names told me that it was dead.
My heart yearns for this family that we could have had.
But My head knows it will never be.
My heart Yearns to feel the warmth.
Its colder now than ever before the loss of feeling from it has scared me.
The frost covers my soul which is now dead.
But why? Why do I still feel the pain?
Please Login to post comments| On August 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I liked this quite a bit. The only thing that I would recommend is keeping a steady capital flow. |
| On August 20th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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very good! i know how u feel! love it! |
| On August 8th 2007 daisylady719 Said : | |
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Nicely done....a have a couple that are on the same topic - My Baby, My Boy and Baby Boy.....check them out if you get a chance, let me know what you think. |
| On August 7th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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great emotion behind the words which express themselves well |
| On August 5th 2007 babygap44 Said : | |
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hey nice poem loved it!!!! |
| On August 3rd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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You did a great job expressing in this one. I love "the frost covers my soul". |
| On August 3rd 2007 ManicPixie27 Said : | |
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This is a really deep poem. It shows true emotions and toughts, and it's just really honest. |
