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The crimson
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Created on 7-29-07
The crimson skies are no longer above
They float around me as a mist.
My sight blurred my thoughts no longer coherent
A veil of darkness draped over my body
Darkness so cold it chills my heart.
Where did I go wrong?
Please Login to post comments| On August 20th 2007 LostLoverGrl Said : | |
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short but good! |
| On August 3rd 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I love this one.. Very short, but I know that I've felt that exact say way before... |
| On July 29th 2007 petersonsv Said : | |
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it's pretty good i liked it please comment me it's how these sights work |
