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Lifeless Storm
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Created on 7-20-07
I Cant take this no more..Cant deal with the pain..These Painful Sharp needles..Fall like acid rain. I walk my way there..In these tattered ripped clothes..Running for shelter..As the storm winds start to blow. So many unknowns..Makes this world so frightening..Everything flashes..Like a deadly bolt of lightning. A bullet to my head..6 feet under..The last sound i heard..Was the roar of the thunder. |
Please Login to post comments| On September 9th 2007 ilovesnirvana8 Said : | |
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this is the best poem!!! |
| On July 26th 2007 spaz007 Said : | |
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I like this one. I actually "saw" what the author was writing. This is good. I like it.
-Ella Bella ♥ |
| On July 24th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said : | |
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hmmm what do i think about this well its stupid to say oh what a sad poem or something like tht for every poem soooooo...... i like it... |
| On July 23rd 2007 BYMcFroodles Said : | |
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wow, sad, but i loved it anyway |
| On July 21st 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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:O :O DANGGGGGG..nice work..holy geez:O |
| On July 21st 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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wow......I was confused at first, but I really liked it =] (sry I'm just a tad slow...) |
