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This Poem Was Based On One Of My Dreams.Rate this Poem
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Heartbroken Dream
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Created on 7-16-07
My Mind Has Stopped..My Soul Is Battered, My Dreams And My Heart..Are Completely Shattered..She Broke My Heart Its Broken In Two..The Last Words She Said Were..I Cant Believe I Actually Fell In Love With You. Suiside Is An Option Hesitation Runs Wild..My Parents Still Treat Me Like A Little Child. Im Sick And Tired Of The Same Old Thing..It Breaks My Heart To Know My Mother Wont Make It To Spring. I Close My Eyes To Make Them Dissapear, I Open My Eyes Again..To Find Them All Here..On The 13th Story Building I Am Abound..I Cry One Last Tear..As I Plummit To The Paved Ground.."Im Sorry God..Im Sorry Dad..Im Sorry To All The Friends..I Could Have Had.." I Spread My Wings To Lifes Big Tangle..Seconds From The Ground..I Am Caught By My Guardian Angel..I Open My Eyes To Find My Mother, Whos Sitting On My Bed..Along With My Little Baby Brother. My Father Walks In To Ask Im Going to Be Alright..Ill Never Forget Friday The 13th..On That Shivering Dreadful Night..I Run Out Of The Room And Pick Up The Phone..I Call My Girl To Tell Her I Love Her and Tell Her She'll Never Have To Be Alone..I Love You..<3
Please Login to post comments| On September 11th 2007 SweetDeath26 Said : | |
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This is really good. Reminds me of Tokio Hotel's "Don't Jump" song. =) |
| On July 28th 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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OMG, thats really good adn powerful |
| On July 26th 2007 spaz007 Said : | |
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AWWW!! This is sad. I love it, but it's so sad!
You're a very talented poet.
-Ella Bella ♥ |
| On July 24th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said : | |
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i love it... i just do now stop making me cry.. |
| On July 23rd 2007 BYMcFroodles Said : | |
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i actually despise it when people don't put poetry into.. LINES.. but with yours i can forget it.. this one was good to |
| On July 16th 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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yay im famous.! lol thanks |
| On July 16th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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AWWWWWWWW..wow....im speechless..this is amazing..u have alot of talent |
| On July 16th 2007 xxSusiee Said : | |
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.. :( your good with poems. but they make me cry. |
| On July 16th 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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Please Comment Everyone:) Thx! |
