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My friend had to live this life..

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Abandoned Thoughts..♥

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All alone in this world..

No family to care..

Ill never know who i got my eyes from..

Or the colour of my hair.

I wait in my room..

Tattered sheets on my bed..

All these hateful feelings..

Run circles around my head.

Why did they leave me..?

Where they rotten to the bitter core..?

Was I a mistake..?

Did they just not want me anymore.?

My heart wonders father than it should..

It wonders if theres ever a chance..

And if there ever could.

Would I meet them again..?

Would they remember my face..?

Would they never be found..?

Gone..without a trace.?

I need to know these things..

Its really not an option..

Because tommorow..

Ill be up for adoption.

 

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On August 1st 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 awwwwwwww the last line is so sad..this is a really good poem sweetie
On July 29th 2007 spaz007 Said :
spaz007 Besides that it is an extremely good poem.
-Ella Bella ♥
On July 29th 2007 spaz007 Said :
spaz007 Aww! This is sad. It makes me think of Harry Potter in a distant sort of way. Because, he didn't have his parents, but he did have his aunt and uncle. I feel sorry for all of the kids who have to suffer from the thoughts of their biological parents. :/
On July 28th 2007 BYMcFroodles Said :
BYMcFroodles hmm... i liked it very much.. = )
On July 28th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said :
PolkaDotTruck i love it, it is soo good