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Just felt bad today...Didnt know why..

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Loves Accidents..

Views (196) Tragedy Created on 7-28-07 Flag

Seconds feel like minutes..

Minutes feel like hours..

Days feel like weeks..

I brought you these flowers.

But now your gone..

Im still waiting for you..

Ive been standing here for a long time..

About a week or two.

The rain starts to fall..

The roses start to drench..

Im still sitting..waitng for you..

On this lonley park bench.

I wait one last second..

And head back for home..

2 minutes later..

I get a call on the phone.

You died in a car crash..

Your all i ever wanted..

My life can no longer live..

My mind is haunted.

These dreams and visions of you..

All seem so real..

The softness of your skin..

The way that you feel.

Your the only one that understood..

All my problems in life..

You made me drop it down..

You made me drop down the knife.

But now you not here..

And im fighting for you..

I need you to know this..

I need you to know the truth.

I loved you more than anything..

I would have given my life..

I would have grown old with you..

Husband and wife.

I miss you my love..

Ill see you soon..

I hope heavens got..

Enough room for two.

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On November 11th 2007 cjaskot Said :
cjaskot I Lovers it!
On September 16th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said :
XxEMOxBITCHxX yay ericy my buddy!! 9/16/07"s poem of the day XD
On September 1st 2007 taylorholley Said :
taylorholley wow...I love this :]] It made me cry...it kinda reminds me what happend to me...But my boyfirend died of cancer not in a car crash... :[[ I love it :]] ur superduper talented
On August 30th 2007 fallenbloodxxx Said :
fallenbloodxxx omg. i freakin LOVE this!!
On August 26th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said :
PolkaDotTruck i like this poem the most out of all of ur poems SINCE I COMMENTED EVERYTHING OF URS.so yea
On July 29th 2007 spaz007 Said :
spaz007 Okay.
Edgar Allen Poe would be proud.
that's all i can say.
This poem is BY FAR the best I've read in my entire life.
I would not lie.
And Heaven does have enough room for two =^.^=
WONDERFUL!
-Ella Bella ♥
Your No. One fan =)
On July 29th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane This is a very good poem. I wasn't expecting the ending-very tragic...But I love the last two lines-a very powerful ending!!
On July 28th 2007 goodgurl8504 Said :
goodgurl8504 Very good!
On July 28th 2007 Ericnessxo Said :
Ericnessxo Ahaa..Noo im not famous =)♥
On July 28th 2007 BYMcFroodles Said :
BYMcFroodles umm... i think i agree with the girl beneath me.. lol.. r u like some secret famous poet that decided to get on here for kicks?? huh huh huh??? r u? r u? r u? lol
On July 28th 2007 PolkaDotTruck Said :
PolkaDotTruck i love it.. are you some secret famous person or something?
On July 28th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 what an excellently written poem.WOWWWWWW..it amazes me that u wrote this..if no one knew how old u were..they would think a grown adult woulda writtten this..its my fav poem of urs so far!!! *clap clap* *gives u a million thumbs up*