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=) I love pretending..♥

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Pretend..

Views (346) Joy Created on 7-25-07 Flag

Stories have a beggining,

Adventures never end,

What age do you have to be,

For it to be illegal to pretend.

I can sail the seven seas,

I can fly up in a plane,

I can ride upon a dragons back,

I can even drive a train.

I can fly on a magic carpet,

I can dive to the bottom of the sea,

I can hide in my mystical dressup box,

where no one can find me.

I can climb walls,

I can do it with my friend,

You can never ever be too old..

To be able to pretend.♥

 

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On August 30th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Wow I like this. It's so true. I love playing opretend sometimes. It lets you escape. Awesome.
On August 30th 2007 chicawhatwhatb Said :
chicawhatwhatb I like this one alot too
On July 30th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx THATS AWESOME!! i love pretending too!! its my favorite thing to do!!! ^.^ amazingly great poem!!
On July 27th 2007 BYMcFroodles Said :
BYMcFroodles HEY i liked it.. I LOVE pretending.. lol yea great work.. loved it.. keep it up... nnd next time.. please let me know when you have another poem up.. i really like the way you write.. *SMILE*
On July 26th 2007 spaz007 Said :
spaz007 For some odd reason, this poem reminds me of The Chrinicles of Narnia, I don't know why, I think it was the stanza, "I can hide in my mystical dressup box, where no one can find me". Very good! -Ella Bella ♥
On July 25th 2007 TaUroNui Said :
TaUroNui omg this is like the best poem!!
On July 25th 2007 Ericnessxo Said :
Ericnessxo =) yay.
On July 25th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 awwwwwwwww wat a cute poem..i love it very much..nice writing :D
On July 25th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said :
XxEMOxBITCHxX love the poem buddy twas full of awsomeness lol =DDD
On July 25th 2007 xxSusiee Said :
xxSusiee thats really good your really great at writing =] but climbing walls isnt smart you end up cracking your head open. (N)