My Once Superman
I could have never seen,
That you’d never make it this far,
This long, yet you had so much going on
I guess you just couldn’t hold on for that long.
I could hear your cries, there was no disguise
In your eyes, the pain shown right through
As if you didn’t have a clue, yet you knew
You knew all the way through
That it wouldn’t go on for much longer.
Your body slowly breaking down,
Your strength no were to be found
Yet you keep up right, not wanting to lose the fight
Each day your eyes lose their gaze
Only wanting to fade away from
The sight of this room, this world.
The blue ocean that once in them,
Now only just a simple muddy pound
Your eyes holding no more pride.
Your arms that once held your
Little girl so high and tight
Just dangle at your side
As the little girls hero starts to fade
From the light of her life.
To think that you were once
The bull, the captain of the team
The head dog of the pack, now sitting
On the sidelines, not having the strength
To go on.
As slowly the Ripper moves in
To your sight, sucking out your life.
Everyone is holding on tightly,
Just like trying to hold onto a grain of sand
As you finally slip into a Oblivion,
Leaving the rest of us behind
Knowing that you’ll look after us,
Yet knowing it’ll never be the same
For I have just lost my Superman
( This poem was writin for a friend of mine that passed away from Cancer, he was like a second dad to me and this poem was the least I could do for him)
| On November 11th 2007 ligersrockssox Said : | |
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its a really great poem. :) |
| On October 27th 2007 paramore549 Said : | |
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amazing |
| On September 18th 2007 pnkchc06 Said : | |
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I love this. I love all your writing... you are really good! |
| On September 9th 2007 rebeldork2 Said : | |
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this poem was awsome so many emotions in it ur friend would really like it |
| On August 22nd 2007 Ericnessxo Said : | |
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Nice writing bro. Keep it upp. *thumbs up*♥ |
| On August 15th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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Aw I'm sorry about your friend. :-/ Your poem was good, ilike it :-) |
| On August 9th 2007 CassieZ Said : | |
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aww I love it, nice write! He sounded like a great guy.. I'm sorry you guys lost such a good friend :( |


