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tired of the pain
can't you feel the hurt in my eyes
cant you see the tears in my heart
to endure all this now or bare the thought of us apart
all the questions and all the wonderin'
whens he gonna break it again.
i dont think i can take anymore
then i do and i dont know why
that feelin' in the pit of my stomach
just keeps on comin back
with or without the facts
here i am and that is that
there's nothing to fear
or is there
keep tryin to look up
and all i feel is down
always sayin' just one more round
pickin' myself up from off the ground
no help
just self
luckily this before; i've never felt
so with or without a pass
i'll hopefully be the last
the last standing
the last demanding
that you'd help me up if i were to fall
and for once just pass me the ball.
| On March 25th 2007 K1llerkat Said : | |
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Very good poem! |
| On March 25th 2007 apllehead123 Said : | |
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I'm Going Through This RIGHT NOW.=/ |


