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Open And Closed
When the sun rises upon my window
I can feel the warm beams shine upon me
Like heaven on earth could truly be
And before I go to bed at night
I pray to god, thank you
Everything’s gonna be alright
For when I lay down my head
And rest it upon your chest
I know your beating comes from your soul
And now mine can take a rest
For before you came into my life
Nothing ever felt just this right
And although we may have cultural differences
You and I will stand as Mr. and Mrs.
Forever I waited to find a love like this
No other lovers on our list
Just you and me, me and you
All obstacles we will endure through
Forever I’ll wait for the love we’ll have
Just one more day
To feel that ray of happiness.
No more sorrows, no more pain
Nothing to lose: so much more to gain
You reminded me of all the things
Oh so special in this world
Family and friends
As it was when I was just a girl
I sometimes wonder when
I lost all those things so dear to me
I’d been waiting so long for someone like you
To come and set me free
And now that I can spread my wings
Feel safety in your arms
I’ll open that window for just one more day
Rainshowers or storms.
For it is not just the sun
That makes us warm inside
It’s all the things we’ve learned
It’s how hard we tried
For we may not be able to see it now
But it will all be worth it;
When the sun shines through these clouds.
| On March 16th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said : | |
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Made my heart all warm and fuzzy, looks like you found love and you have a headlock on it!! |
| On March 7th 2007 semperfi11285 Said : | |
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that is AWESOME. i love this poem.....very heartfelt! good job |


