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Comprehend

Views (99) Other Created on 3-6-07 Flag
No more love songs
                   Just heads on
                                            Collisions
 
Irreplaceable indecisions
Undisplacable visions. Of the fallen.

Within self ; disruption

Taken heed within corruption
Never minding the representation of weakening repercussions

For when you blame me you can only blame you
Pointing my finger straight through
your existence only painted in water color
bright and beautiful as the summer
you see light take flight right by me
or right for me
only to indulge in superficiality
cuz every time you paint those eyes in another one of your lies
an angel dies and somewhere a heart cries for one more of those love songs.
Traveling along for so long that it ends up heads on
Never strong in this world of disorder
Capable minds wasted on hatred and murder
Wiping one more crime scene or was that just a dream
Another place to ride and hide find safety in the lies
No more god within or lives
For we'd rather be forgiven for the purposeful collision
Then to admit in imperfection
Creating deception to save our own perception of hierarchy
Only to engage in matrimony
and create what appears to be a happy family
To raise one more just one of a kind
to create in our minds individuality
in doing so mocking spirituality
Forming prisons as our free
Can't you see
Nothing in this world of ours belongs
Not even these here Love Songs.
 
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On March 16th 2007 BlkWingDragon Said :
BlkWingDragon I love the way your poems tell a story, kinda like a personal journey, thank you for sharing your deepest thoughts!
On March 7th 2007 isdrowning Said :
isdrowning that was really good. it had some very demented rhyme scheme, but it's still good.