ElComino68

I'm in love with Chris!

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For the First Time

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Created on 7-14-07

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I loved the way you laughed when we got in a tickle fight.

I loved that feeling i had when we danced in the moonlight.

I loved it when you held my hand when we went for a stroll.

I loved it when you bet me a kiss when you taught me how to bowl.

I loved the way you wraped your arms around me when we kissed.

It's just some of the many things about you that I miss.

You come in and out of my head, but in my heart you remain.

Getting back to life after knowing your love.

Is driving me insane.

As I lie awake at night crying to the Lord above.

I realize for the first time, I don't want to be in love!

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On July 15th 2007 ElComino68 Said :

	yea i know its a little off but its a work in progress so we'll see how it goes

On July 15th 2007 demon202 Said :

	good poem but could be better the flow near the end is off it is a good poem very moving maybe a tweek could make it better

On July 14th 2007 tswieberg Said :

	I really love your poem....this is great, I look forward to reading more.