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Created:
01/19 2007
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337
Category:
Love
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Drifter
| black shadows dance around me, i want to be free and drift to my dreams. i dont like what i see. i'm alone, blink my eyes, where have i gone? my thoughts no one could have known- these are needles i lie on. my mind is a movie, i want you to hold me, i need to hear the words you told me. this room is so cold, i am growing old...but i will not cry- we are perfect, you and i. love is not blind, love is sight- shining uncontrollable light. losing you- i can't think, deeper and deeper i sink into that nightmare. where are you? loving me like you always do. why am i afraid? i love you too. tired, i need to rest now- i dont know how. go away, let me die. your eyes keep mine alive. |
Please Login to post comments| On June 28th 2007 California1516 Said: |
| wow..amazing poem |
| On May 9th 2007 vballeiluj Said: |
| Wow, that makes so much sense. GREAT JOB! |
| On March 4th 2007 lydiafbjrlire Said: |
| your eyes keep mine alive.... i have read a few of your poems and alot of times i feel your lines like they were my words.... and only you put them into words.... and i just can't say anymore about why but god girl keep it up... it makes me feel better knowing that someone else in some way knows what its like to lose love....(that last line captured me and carried me off) |
| On March 1st 2007 yournotemo Said: |
| wow this is a powerful poem just like all of your others |
| On January 25th 2007 OddsAndEvenSOs Said: |
| i like this!
it's awesome |
