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FEAR OF A SERIAL KILLERRate this Poem
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heart, soul, all |
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Twisted Sister |
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Naked Dreams |
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goodbye kiss |
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Blood & Romance |
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Unrequited Lust |
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My name is...Myself? |
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Only a Smile |
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Conflict |
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New Rendition |
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Yesterday, Today, Forever |
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Generation X |
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Charicature of Intimacy |
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Misplaced Salvation |
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Let it Go |
Let it Go
she whispers in fear
what if he knows
what if he could hear?
desperation fills her
tell me, tell me dear
what is hauting you?
your eyes hold shadows
just let it go, let it go
she speaks so slow
that can't be, it can't
"he hides the bodies
underneath our beds,
he kills them slowly.
he kissed me on the forehead,
i saw him do it,
he said i'd forget-
it would be our secret."
she spoke so low...
just let it go, let it go
i held her close
we will run away
and he will never know
we can heal then
there won't be any ghosts
under our sheets
or in the shadows
we can let it go, let it go
time moves so slow
it can't be, it can't
"he hid the bodies
underneath our beds,
he killed them slowly.
he kissed me on the forhead,
i saw him do it,
and he said i'd forget-
but it's not a secret.
the words she spoke
and she let it go, let it go
*this is based loosely on the acts of a convicted serial killer..*
| On January 21st 2007 smoothrider41 Said : | |
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wow.
really nice.
=) |
| On January 16th 2007 passionistic Said : | |
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The flow in this could be a little better ... but other then that I like it :D I have one about serial killers .. but I dont think many here would understand it .. |
| On January 8th 2007 Liz8787 Said : | |
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I like this poem. as all your poems it is clear and well written. This one is special because it has an Edgar Allen Poe them to it. |
| On January 8th 2007 ianface27 Said : | |
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i meant looks like your yelling, anyway awesome poem |
| On January 8th 2007 ianface27 Said : | |
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didnt mean to make the comments in all caps =/ looks like im yellin' about a serial killer.. |


