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some things are meant to have a beat

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Charicature of Intimacy

Views (260) Lyric Created on 1-4-07 Flag

well i'm spinning in circles
and i'm speaking in riddles
crying on the inside, dying on the inside
as i laugh out loud

I'm a ghost, i'm a memory
but i'm everything you want to be
I tell the truth to you
through my lying eyes, crying eyes

well i'm walking in wonder
and you're leaning in closer
surprised by this kiss, disguised by this kiss
as i sneak a smile

I'm the joke, i'm the irony
love can come from getting lucky
I have something to say
writing down revised words, surprised words

you've got me spinning in circles
and walking in wonder
pull me close and dance with me tonight

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On June 14th 2007 NinjatheJake Said :
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I've been reading writings on here for the better part of an hour and this is the first piece that I can respectfully call a poem. Thank you for that.
On March 4th 2007 lydiafbjrlire Said :
lydiafbjrlire i tell the truth to you through my lying eyes.... thats a real one... i been there.... and that beat goes on forever
On February 17th 2007 DrRazorblade Said :
DrRazorblade heard that title somewhere else before hmmmm.....
On January 12th 2007 ralicia Said :
ralicia Another good one