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Created on 1-4-07
someone's lying someone'e hiding
Here I'm hanging in the balance
don't let go for fear of falling
Someone's angry someone's fighting
your face reveals your feelings
this chaos and confusion
is eating you alive
walking on a thin line
and screaming on the inside
something's different something's crazy
you're pulling me to pieces
let my tears seep to your soul
something's changing something's strange
your wounds will need some healing
this chaos and confusion
is eating you alive
walking on a thin line
and screaming on the inside
someone's lying someone's hiding
someone's angry someone's fighting
something's different something's crazy
something's changing something's strange
Please Login to post comments| On January 19th 2007 footmouth1022 Said : | |
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"you're pulling me to pieces
let my tears seep to your soul" - I like this verse. Its very solid and visual. You can actually feel the structure through reading it... the salty cool tears... pain it must feel to seep into the soul. Deep... very deep. |
| On January 11th 2007 stillsweet420 Said : | |
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agree with mytrin but its good |
| On January 10th 2007 RapeMeForLove Said : | |
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This one was so sexy. Im going to touch myself! Lmao. Jk. |
| On January 4th 2007 mytrin Said : | |
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sounds like it could be a song, with its almost repeating chorus, sounds good |
| On January 4th 2007 mytrin Said : | |
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sounds like it could be a song, with its almost repeating chorus |
