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Blood & Romance
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Created on 1-4-07
my blood's on your hands
you've crossed the line
and slit my wrists
a sweet razorblade kiss
and you think i'm alright
when you look in my eyes
its a familiar diguise
i'm walking in the dark
but can you see the light?
it's so hard to live
but even harder to die
you tell me its what i want
think you know but you dont
and I'll tell you what i need
as i break down to bleed
but i believe in better things
i just want to be free again
trade this knife for a pair of wings
you've crossed the line
and slit my wrists
a sweet razorblade kiss
and you think i'm alright
when you look in my eyes
its a familiar diguise
i'm walking in the dark
but can you see the light?
it's so hard to live
but even harder to die
you tell me its what i want
think you know but you dont
and I'll tell you what i need
as i break down to bleed
but i believe in better things
i just want to be free again
trade this knife for a pair of wings
Please Login to post comments| On November 7th 2007 brokenbliss33 Said : | |
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this is so insirational. and i loeve how you incorporated "razorblade kiss" into this poem.
i love HIM. |
| On September 16th 2007 AmiottDe Said : | |
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That is so awesome. It is beautiful!! |
| On May 20th 2007 muhhlove Said : | |
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wow..this is really good.
its kinda like the stuff i write.
you should check out mine.
its called "cut."
[and i like your hair]
=D have a nice day =] |
| On May 18th 2007 dieromantic88 Said : | |
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nice |
| On January 26th 2007 ralicia Said : | |
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Good work! |
| On January 23rd 2007 emopunks8r8sex Said : | |
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i really like this one! |
| On January 21st 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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wow.....awesome.....dang I wish I could write even a smidgen like that...SO TRUE! |
| On January 11th 2007 AlishaFoerster Said : | |
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true |
| On January 9th 2007 Ekahnicole Said : | |
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i do like HIM and i actually got inspired by that in some way |
| On January 9th 2007 m4phi4vlad Said : | |
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do you like HIM because they wrote a song called raszor blade kiss |
