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shut up and hold me in your arms

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goodbye kiss

Views (419) Anger Created on 1-4-07 Flag
i dont care who you are
in this darkness
just shut up
and hold me in your arms
you ask too many questions
and tell too many lies
dont say a word
and let me cry tonight
i feel together
as i fall apart
broken pieces are scattered
from my heart
so just walk away
before you want me
because i'll hurt you
and forget every word you say
dont take this to heart
when i say this
but fuck you
with a goodbye kiss
you're a needle in my arm
but i am tired
of that potent drug
everyone can see the scars
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On March 4th 2007 lydiafbjrlire Said :
lydiafbjrlire but pushing is so much better than pulling..... in some ways
On March 4th 2007 lydiafbjrlire Said :
lydiafbjrlire push and pull ..... isn't that what it's all about
On March 2nd 2007 kayla304 Said :
kayla304 amazing
On February 5th 2007 prettybritty3 Said :
prettybritty3 wow thats great i love it!~brit~♥
On January 27th 2007 poofacekk Said :
poofacekk this one is great too i love it
On January 17th 2007 valenciano Said :
valenciano i really like this one ive felt this way many times. good one!
On January 16th 2007 phoenixkat Said :
phoenixkat wow i love it! it sounds like something i can relate to!
On January 11th 2007 JeffLip Said :
JeffLip amazing! i love it
On January 9th 2007 m4phi4vlad Said :
m4phi4vlad ouch... that seems so... 'emo' as so many would call it.. but i dont see it that way... its good
On January 8th 2007 Liz8787 Said :
Liz8787 This is powerful.
On January 5th 2007 themisskayla Said :
themisskayla OMG thats so true the last sentence coz i cut my wrist and every one sees the scars