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..clothed only in elegance...Rate this Poem
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Naked Dreams
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Created on 1-2-07
she's surrounded by semi-darkness showing fair soft skin, clothed only in the elegance of pinkish pearls hung around her neck. you can hear the soft repitition of her breathing mirrored in the movement of her breast, with lips slightly parted, begging for kisses even in her sleep. could she break your heart just as fast as she'll offer it to keep is what you're thinking while you watch her, so still and sweet. if only you knew that you are with her in her dreams, she's dreaming of your face and touch in this reverie you'll never see. the warmth of her body brings your mind at ease and you long for the morning when you can tell her she's beautiful and everything you need.
Please Login to post comments| On May 12th 2008 lonestarwaltzi Said : | |
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i love it! perfect. i like the path you follow to find it. |
| On April 7th 2007 moraldecay12 Said : | |
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finally someone who wrote something that's actually good! most of what i find is all cliched, but this is really good. vivid. love it... |
| On January 30th 2007 sunny102 Said : | |
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Very nice! |
| On January 27th 2007 poofacekk Said : | |
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this is cute... i love it |
| On January 16th 2007 phoenixkat Said : | |
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its touching. i love it. |
| On January 16th 2007 loverGOTH Said : | |
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i love it so |
| On January 16th 2007 sid1976 Said : | |
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love the imagery and the scene it presents. |
| On January 14th 2007 Ekahnicole Said : | |
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it is supposed to show what a person feels when they look at the person they love while they are sleeping, and also that even while his girl is sleeping she is thinking of him as well. does that make sense? |
| On January 11th 2007 yourdamnmother Said : | |
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i like this one buti kinda don't get the story..idk maybe give a little bit more detail on the relationship of the 2 people. |
| On January 9th 2007 m4phi4vlad Said : | |
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is this what a girl thinks when she loves you? |
