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My father, My Friend.
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Created on 9-17-07
Long day
And now I'm crying desperately
Begging God
Screaming at him for taking you away
Breaking down
A bliss of uncontrolable pain
The tears blending in
With the pouring rain
Everything, falling in pieces
Without you it seems
This life of mine
Will never again be complete
Daddy, life with you gone
With you not being here
Everything, painfully wrong
Shown in every single tear
I'll tell the whole world
I don't think I'll go back home
I can't stand the screams
The constant reminder of being alone
Losing you
Life hits a sudden end
I'll never let you go
My father, my friend
Please Login to post comments| On October 7th 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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awh goodness sam, all of your poems give me chills. i loved it!!! i love you! =) *huge hug*
MAGNA CUM LAUDE! |
| On September 17th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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awwwwwww sam! ur writing is so beautiful! this was soooooooo so good! i think i'll say it in spanish! MUY MUY BIEN!
just remember i'm always here for ya my 1/3 brain! +) (look its an alien! i wonder if it will freak out amber?) |
