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My Mistake, Your Miracle

Views (88) Pain Created on 7-28-07 Flag

My dear friend

I hope to show you the light

Where I once had been

Here you still lie

 

I know now

How much it hurts

To see someone you love

Throw away what their worth

 

The reality

The pain

Knowing it was once I

To cause the hurt on this page

 

Give me a chance, please

Spare me the time

Wait a minute, listen to me

Don't ruin your life

 

Things may seem bad

To hard to handle

But please know that

This isn't the answer

 

Please, put down

The pain in this bottle

You can still turn this around

              Let my mistake be your miracle

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On July 29th 2007 crazkoala Said :
crazkoala AHHHHHH SAMBA-LAM!!!!! that was amazing... it was perfect. perfect. that is the only word that can describe it. "let my mistake be your miracle" chills. that was...

im proud of my 1/3 of brain too!!!! i love you!!!! =)
On July 29th 2007 individulsong Said :
individulsong you're right. it is sad. you write sad poetry, Tutu! But, none the less I agree with Bailie... I'm very proud of you too! ~Lola (Lola is the name of one of my characters in a story I am writing, lol!)
On July 29th 2007 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *TEARS!!* not tear tears!! this is soo awsome sam and so powerfully written! im so proud of you!!!!!!! =D
On July 28th 2007 EdwardRoxMySox Said :
EdwardRoxMySox =[