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Another Attempt
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Created on 7-27-07
Running, your quickly out of view
Another attempt
Another try
To escape this horrific fate
Not knowing
Not caring
At all where you end up
You fall down, gasping
It's too late
And your too tired
Of all the fighting
To think of yourself
Destined to endure
Sick from the tears
Caused by this pain
Year after year
God wouldn't burden you with this
If it were too much to handle
You plead with him now
To please give you an answer
What to do
Where to go
Give you the words to say
Please don't let this be so
I suppose I should
Go back there
If only I could
I would, I swear
Please Login to post comments| On July 28th 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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that was intense... i think... this one... was the only one that made me want to run away... if you understand what i mean? wickedly brilliant... *stares madly at computer* i loved it. but it was... slightly saddening. =( |
| On July 28th 2007 sabbathNikole Said : | |
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beautifully soul-wrenching. |
| On July 28th 2007 individulsong Said : | |
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.........you're good at this kind of style... |
| On July 27th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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*gasp* *clutches at heart and faints!* ahhh so good! but slightly depressing! still love it though
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