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I was in a very depressing mood.Rate this Poem
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Slipping Control
Quietly here I sit
The blood trickles to the floor
When did my control slip?
Had my sanity gone out the door?
The dark pool of red
Staining the bathroom tile
Thoughts blurring in my head
This liquid pool, holding significance to my life
Slowly dripping from my wrist
Gathering around, growing larger in my midst
Just as the drops of red
So had my reasons for this
I hope they can hear me scream
Cause my pain is just too great
This tragedy, sadly its no dream
Make me a stage, I'll show them true pain
This time, there's no cleaning my slate
No dear, I fear it's too late
As my eyes blurr with sudden hate
I fall to the floor, my last breath of pain
| On July 25th 2007 sabbathNikole Said : | |
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Oh, my. Beautiful. *applauds* |
| On July 25th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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.................wow.......im in shock..so good! |
| On July 23rd 2007 crazkoala Said : | |
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wow.. the imagery. wow sam... |
| On July 23rd 2007 individulsong Said : | |
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Breath of Pain. Yes. I have a poem titled that. I know exactly where you are coming from here! The red really helps. |


