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THE ENCHANTED RIVER |
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The memories are REAL |
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Short and sweet |
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WHY IS MY POETRY LITTERED WITH DOOM |
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A VIOLENT ROMANCE |
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LOVE IN A BOTTLE |
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A PASSION FOR POPPIES |
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The truth about JACK & JILL |
The truth about JACK & JILL
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Created on 11-22-07
Jack and Jill would party hard.
For weeks they'd be on speed.
Lack of food was not a problem.
But water they would need.
They started walking up a hill.
A bucket they would bring.
They'd fill it up with water.
From a fresh mountain spring.
But when they got up to the top,
They saw the spring was dry.
Jill kicked Jack cause she was mad.
And Jack began to cry.
As they headed down the hill.
The bucket void of water still.
Jill slipped on an awkward stone
And landed hard on her tail bone.
As she rolled around in pain.
The screaming made Jack go insane.
He slipped aswell and cracked his head.
In a matter of seconds he was dead.
Jill had dropped her medication.
But what killed her was dehydration.
What started as a trip for water.
Turned into a bloody slaughter.
JoN.
23-Nov-07
Please Login to post comments| On January 20th 2008 miseryLOVESme Said : | |
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That's awesome-ness... nice twist on an old fairy tale *hehe* |
| On December 20th 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Anything's allowed - at least that's the rule I go by. (probably why you don't like my stuff :P) Nice poem, btw. |
| On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said : | |
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funny |
| On November 24th 2007 Spazzy13 Said : | |
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Awesome.
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| On November 22nd 2007 stics917 Said : | |
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lmao nice dude :] |
