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THE ENCHANTED RIVER |
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The memories are REAL |
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Short and sweet |
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I |
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WHY IS MY POETRY LITTERED WITH DOOM |
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A VIOLENT ROMANCE |
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LOVE IN A BOTTLE |
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A PASSION FOR POPPIES |
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ANIMAL AFFAIR |
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73 TOPICS (to write about) |
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The truth about JACK & JILL |
A PASSION FOR POPPIES
Grab a plug mid afternoon.
Pile that shit up like a dune.
I don't know but I've been told,
opium makes liquid gold.
The stuff that swims atop my spoon,
will all be in my system soon.
Looking forward to my next hit.
I don't like waiting not one bit.
The holes I put in my own arm,
are not that bad, it's not much harm.
Needle drugs are not so bad.
The best times that I ever had.
It's reputation makes me sad.
A secret kept from mum and dad.
If they knew, how would they be?
Not too well I guarantee.
I don't pursue a life of crime,
my hobbies don't allow for time.
But lets get back to the spoon at hand.
The greatest fluid in this land.
I'm pretty keen to try new things.
But morphine's best, it gives me wings.
I love my drugs, I must confess,
without which I would be a mess.
It might just kill me, I don't care.
I won't be back, which seems unfair.
I've often heard that more is less.
To me that is poetic mess.
I won't O.D. I wouldn't dare.
Could I still die with doctors there?
The tallest poppies can't be stopped.
A morphine fix just can't be topped.
I say I'll quit the shit one day.
But that's a lie, I never may.
I like the shit too much to stop.
And I don't care if you're a cop.
I'm feeling sick, it must be time.
It's such a shame that it's a crime.
As I prepare a scheduled dose,
I know some people think it's gross.
But if you tried it once or twice,
you won't look back, it's just too nice.
It's been too long to just decide.
These facts I can no longer hide.
I wouldn't recommend this life.
I have no family, kids or wife.
If you can help, here's what to do.
I need that script prescribed to you.
I will take anything I can.
It doesn't mean I'm not a man.
I try to think what else to say.
Morphine helps to make my day.
Caffeine is a drug you know.
It shits me how people think no.
It's no ones problem what I do,
I'm having fun and so should you.
My message here in this last verse:
LIFE AINT BAD, IT COULD BE WORSE.
JoN.
24th - Oct - 2007
| On October 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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woooow,, u awsomesaucin it here,, craxy lines all over,, fantastic!.. 'mazing flow,,, entirely ironic that u could make it sooo long,, damn,, and vvvvvery nice ending to it,, very good point.. i've seen worse... farrr worse.. neat ... not so neat that people keep on posting about their similiar poems,, hmm,, *pppsssttt* that's what comments on the profiles and messages are for.. sillies.. try somethin new.. hope everyone doesn't start off writing poems on drugs,, oh YAY,, what a revolution!... oh wellps... great inspirationings... ^___^,,,, excellent job on the poemity.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On October 17th 2007 MrKeesee Said : | |
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You almost pulled it off again man, that shit is almost as crazy as me...you should check out my poem/song "What they take" |
| On October 17th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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very sad... |
| On October 17th 2007 darkmatters Said : | |
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nice man |
| On October 16th 2007 robespierre96 Said : | |
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awesome use of ryme and rythem,not to mention the flow!i used to feel the same way!!!!lol! give "fire and ice" a read if you have time.your critique is welcome! |
| On October 16th 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome. Simple and straight forward. |
| On October 14th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..thats deep and full of emotion..i like it alot!! |
| On October 14th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Deep bro...Imspires me to write "A passion for Hemp" |


