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LOVE IN A BOTTLE

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LOVE IN A BOTTLE

I found my heart before my head.
Trapped in a bottle, my heart was dead.

It's been so long since it was fed.
This lonely heart was put to bed.

Bottled up with fear and dread,
Packed in a box, locked in a shed.

'Do not open!' the label said.
In big blue letters, my heart was red.

There are some things I've left unsaid.
Just use your heart to think instead.


(c) JoN. Oct 12 - 2007

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On November 9th 2007 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
I liked it
On October 22nd 2007 miseryLOVESme Said :
miseryLOVESme XD!
On October 18th 2007 PoeticPang Said :
PoeticPang hahaha.. i'll take some looks at the artwork laters to,,kewl,, too kewl,, psychadellic rhyming.... very full of,, well,, the heart cannot think,, but,, uh,, yeah,,, it's a great line,, i'm wondering now.. it makes me wonder.. lol.. great job! keep up the focus!!! XD~~~~~~~~~~~Pang
On October 16th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg This is really good. Nice poem!
On October 14th 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aw i really like this. great job
On October 14th 2007 joppysgirl Said :
joppysgirl I like it
On October 14th 2007 lampshadeking6 Said :
my picture
wowo very nice very nice
On October 14th 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said :
ESCAPEDFROMGOD I did some concept drawings for this one. In my art.