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THE ENCHANTED RIVER |
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The memories are REAL |
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Short and sweet |
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I |
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WHY IS MY POETRY LITTERED WITH DOOM |
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A VIOLENT ROMANCE |
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LOVE IN A BOTTLE |
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A PASSION FOR POPPIES |
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ANIMAL AFFAIR |
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73 TOPICS (to write about) |
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The truth about JACK & JILL |
WHY IS MY POETRY LITTERED WITH DOOM
There is a space behind your face,
Above where you put food.
Many things can leave that place,
Depending on your mood.
It is this space behind your face,
That operates your pen.
It brings to life this simple tool,
There's just no telling when.
A special place behind your face,
Where memories reside.
You can't delete the saddest things,
Like all the times you cried.
A secret place behind your face,
Where bad things tend to hide.
It's hard to cover up those things,
Believe me I have tried.
There must be space behind this face,
I constantly hear voices.
I wish they would shut up for good,
They've helped me make bad choices.
Within this space behind your face,
The darkness tends to loom,
The lights you shine won't kill this thing,
The darkness will resume.
I hate this space under my face,
That keeps me up at night.
Even if I get to sleep,
It wakes me with a fright.
You might say that there is no space,
Like this in your head.
It's just you havn't found it yet,
Deny not what I've said.
JoN. 28-Sep-2007.
| On October 22nd 2007 miseryLOVESme Said : | |
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**AWESOME-NESS** I like this... check out mine if you don't care XD! |
| On October 16th 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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My space is empty, so it's all good :P Great poem. |
| On October 12th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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haha! nice! Finally, someone creative! |
| On October 7th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Really like, great job!! :D Deep and meaningful :D |
| On October 1st 2007 Myst222 Said : | |
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This is a great poem. I really like your style. Keep it up! |
| On September 30th 2007 perdylilpyro Said : | |
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nice |
| On September 28th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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WOW i really love this poem so so true.... |
| On September 28th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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HOLY:O woahhhhhhhhh..i love it!!! very deep!! my kinda poem!!!! |
| On September 28th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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OMG, this is an amazing poem. I think this is one of the deepest, most well written poems that I have read. Keep them coming. |


