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Short and sweet

Views (103) Anger Created on 9-27-07 Flag

When I awake,

I look around,

Consciousness starts creeping.

Work, mortal hunger.

I wish I was still sleeping.

 

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On October 16th 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Nice.
On October 12th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said :
mazerthumpkin A sense of elegance!? I doubt that's what you were going for. I'd be all about compliments on my incredible intellect. lol. I appreciate your mind.
On October 4th 2007 WaterSheerie Said :
WaterSheerie Beautiful. Simplicity is sometimes the best, and certainly shows a sense of elegance.
On September 30th 2007 perdylilpyro Said :
perdylilpyro your work has a heavy feel;good in a literary sence
On September 27th 2007 Myst222 Said :
Myst222 I concur!