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THE ENCHANTED RIVER |
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The memories are REAL |
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Short and sweet |
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WHY IS MY POETRY LITTERED WITH DOOM |
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A VIOLENT ROMANCE |
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LOVE IN A BOTTLE |
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A PASSION FOR POPPIES |
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ANIMAL AFFAIR |
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The truth about JACK & JILL |
The memories are REAL
Of all the places in the world,
The best ones are not real.
The memories of visiting,
Are what they made you feel.
It might not be a happy place,
You could run for your life.
I've been bashed and brutalised,
And pierced through with a knife.
Things can turn real sour fast,
There's blood that has to spill.
It's not in my real nature,
In dreams I've had to kill.
With luck you'll find a stranger,
That makes you feel so good.
Just for now you're not alone,
Shared thoughts are understood.
Sometimes you're an animal,
Or a human that can fly.
Defy all laws of physics,
And never wonder why.
There's never any warning,
This whole trip could just end.
No chance to have a look around,
Or farewell to a friend.
You can't take nothing from this place,
Cause none of it is true.
You might hold someone in you're arms,
Just can't bring them with you.
Even if you're not that tired,
You might still have it in you.
Close your eyes and concentrate,
With luck you can continue.
Worst fears can come out in dreams,
Like fear of heights or bugs.
The best dreams that I ever had,
While comming off hard drugs.
It took two hours to write this thing,
I've tried to make it rhyme.
I'd love to know just what you thought,
And thank you for your time.
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| On October 22nd 2007 miseryLOVESme Said : | |
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There is something about this that intreagues(sp?) me... i just don't know what it is... but this is my fave paragraph...
"Sometimes you're an animal,
Or a human that can fly.
Defy all laws of physics,
And never wonder why."
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| On October 22nd 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Captures the vivid world of a utopia well |
| On October 16th 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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I definitely like this. I day dream (if you could call it that) a lot and know exactly where you're coming from. Awesome write. |
| On October 12th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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interesting... |
| On September 26th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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So this one kinda drew me into the far off place-your mind, a dream...I like the idea of this one. Dreamland is enchanting whether scary, sad or happy. I thought it was kinda cute the way you threw that last bit in there-speaking out to the reader...Anyways, I thought this was a great write! |
| On September 24th 2007 Myst222 Said : | |
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I'm allured by this poem. You have a sense of understanding things in ways unknown to most men. |


