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THE ENCHANTED RIVER |
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The truth about JACK & JILL |
THE ENCHANTED RIVER
Flowing down towards the valley,
Bazzle, sugar, and spice,
Graceful as it ends,
Eggs, milk, rum and ice.
In the valley were peace and quiet,
A baby squirrel was drinking.
And in the middle of the lake,
A speck of dust was sinking.
A noise that came from dry land,
The noise of a madman screaming.
As he came into the light,
His nose and ears were steaming.
He reached down to his abdomen,
And ripped out half his liver.
He held it high above his head,
And threw it in the river.
It sank right to the bottom,
Where it rotted through the years.
The moral of this story is,
A madman no one hears.
JoN.
| On October 22nd 2007 miseryLOVESme Said : | |
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for some reason this is utterly nonsense, yet makes complete sense to me... don't even know if what I said will make sense to you... I guess in a was everyone is a madman of sorts XP! |
| On October 22nd 2007 ESCAPEDFROMGOD Said : | |
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AUTHORS NOTE: I submitted this poem in a poetry competition. Well I didn't take first prize, but this little poem got the Poetry Fellowship Award. The next day it got the Editor's Choice award.
The day after that it got rejected. I can only wonder how far up the ladder it got. JoN. |
| On October 22nd 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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very different but I like it! I like original :) |
| On October 12th 2007 mazerthumpkin Said : | |
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ha! that's awesome! If everyone were as creative as you we wouldn't have to have whole poem lables dedicated to love, pain, and passion. |
| On September 26th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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This was a really good piece. It was a bit strange, but I like the way you put it all together! |
| On September 24th 2007 Myst222 Said : | |
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I like this alot! Very vivid and descriptive. |


