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For all the suicidal on this site.

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Testriffic Suicide

Views (81) Worry Created on 5-24-07 Flag

I read so many times, on this site.

Death into rhymes, it doesn't seem right.

So many faces, would like to die.

Go without traces, I read them and sigh.

I read about cutting, hanging by a noose.

Doors to lives shutting, police cutting them lose.

Pills by the many, and a final lullaby.

White lace is as good as any, its their final good bye.

Will it be oak, or maybe white pine?

Say goodbye to their folk, sip a final glass of wine.

After everything, even in the end.

They write down everything, and send it to a friend.

That friend is crushed, however the lost never thinks.

Their mind is hushed, their friend for months sinks, and sinks.

Their family weeps, and flowers they will place.

Memorys your family will keep, but your legacy gone...without a trace.

 

 

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On June 8th 2008 rottenwhore Said :
rottenwhore so true... its an obvious statement, but people do need it to be spelt out for them. 'the world chooses to ignore the pain thats not public.'
On June 8th 2008 rottenwhore Said :
rottenwhore so true... its an obvious statement, but people do need it to be spelt out for them. 'the world chooses to ignore the pain thats not public.'
On June 7th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap Its kinda like wow. It makes you want to turn your head and think about it. Yet it never leaves your head because while you write your poem you think about this. Bravo dear! Haleylynn
On June 3rd 2007 AlBobby Said :
AlBobby I like this poem a lot. I've thought about killing myself and I know a few other people who have as well and this is the sad truth. I've written poems about suicide and so has one of my friends. I think the saddest part about suicide is how people never see how great tomorrow is 'cause they never let it come. Well tafn. good poem.
On May 29th 2007 kickagnome Said :
kickagnome i completely agree with this..It so unfortunate and so truee
On May 24th 2007 Bballloco10 Said :
Bballloco10 I love this...its so sad...but wat's even sadder is it's so true...too many people hurt and think suicide is the only answer..I jus wish something would show them it wasnt.
On May 24th 2007 november38577 Said :
november38577 I think that this is true beyond words. I have lost a friend... I have a red tear on the leaf of my rose tattoo to signify him. Everything he could have done is gone. I get this. I get it oh so well. I don't understand how someone would want to go like that? I just don't get it! Depression must suck really bad in order to make people think that Suicide is the only way out-because it's not.