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I wrote this for a friend of whom I like

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Your Sunlight

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My eyes are dark with the frustration.

Confusion lurks at every bend of the road.

I don't think I can handle another conversation.

I think I am probably going to explode.

 

Turning, and turning, this is out of control

Memories flash and remind me of you.

The pain so deep it cuts into my soul.

I sit down on the road and rest for a few.

 

I hate how people can mess with someones head.

Destroy everything they represent for their own needs.

Get what they want, and leave the person for dead.

Her soul dies, she changes, and he will proceed

 

On to the next one he will go...

Like a lion he always gets his prey.

His real mission she will never know.

Her real feelings he won't hear her say.

 

So he gets what he wants and he leaves her behind.

She lays there thinking about where he went.

Hopefully, never again will she ever be so blind.

Her innocence is gone , and her trust is bent.

 

So let me save you , and walk with me into the sun.

Let me hold your hand through your darkest hours.

Instead of darkness, and depression lets have fun.

The moment is yours, but let it be ours.

 

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On June 21st 2008 Crazymisskaz Said :
Crazymisskaz aww this is so cute. loving the symbolism
On May 8th 2008 alize1881 Said :
alize1881 I think you have great way to express yourself I really with it. To many thing going on in my mind
On May 24th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth Wow, this is wonderful. I mean, wow, straight form the heart and beautifully written. Thank you for sharing that with me.
On April 3rd 2007 koolaidclann Said :
koolaidclann very well written your self there
On December 29th 2006 Sunshine021302 Said :
Sunshine021302 This was great and it is good that you want your friend to realize that there is somebody out there for her to treat her good and she doesnt have to settle for all the wrong guys..hope she see's that it you.
On December 8th 2006 maryjoseph Said :
maryjoseph this is a well woven poem! its hard to see friends screw up their lives and i hope it works out you did an awsome job on this!
On December 5th 2006 micsbrat Said :
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It's amazing how the people that look at you everyday never really see you.
On December 3rd 2006 Dee071701 Said :
Dee071701 I hope that she notices who you are. This is a beautiful poem.
On December 3rd 2006 snowmanx3 Said :
snowmanx3 This is really beautiful. =]
On December 3rd 2006 Acceptance Said :
Acceptance Great poem.
On December 3rd 2006 Dustman99 Said :
Dustman99 This friend always chose bad guys, and I just wanted her to look at me...lol...and know that I exist.