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The Rose and the Bell
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Created on 11-25-06
Life is a red rose, smell it and enjoy it.
Youth is a tease, a mere flicker of happiness.
Time is a ruler, constantly reminding you of your mortality.
Stress is a crutch, and it helps you stay on your feet.
Love is a lie, told to you to give you hope.
Friends are a puzzle piece, some stay interlocked, some drop on the floor.
Happiness is a magic show, now you see it, now you don't.
Possessions are a void, they consist of nothing.
Money is garbage, worthless and time consuming.
Age is a lonely old shoe, wrinkled and full of wisdom
Death is a bell, we will all ring it .
Youth is a tease, a mere flicker of happiness.
Time is a ruler, constantly reminding you of your mortality.
Stress is a crutch, and it helps you stay on your feet.
Love is a lie, told to you to give you hope.
Friends are a puzzle piece, some stay interlocked, some drop on the floor.
Happiness is a magic show, now you see it, now you don't.
Possessions are a void, they consist of nothing.
Money is garbage, worthless and time consuming.
Age is a lonely old shoe, wrinkled and full of wisdom
Death is a bell, we will all ring it .
Please Login to post comments| On May 24th 2007 Bballloco10 Said : | |
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I LOVE THIS! I love the comparison! I dont think you should stop writing. You are so good at it...I like your word choice too...:) |
| On April 4th 2007 knowlyfe Said : | |
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wow. i like it. "Happiness is a magic show, now you see it, now you don't" favorite metaphore. |
| On December 8th 2006 Alika18 Said : | |
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Very nice, i can apprieciate the metaphorical use. i like it, smoothe, but with sad undertones |
| On December 3rd 2006 yourbaby16 Said : | |
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dang your amazing thats all i can say. |
| On December 3rd 2006 Angelashlinn Said : | |
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Wow...I wrote a poem about my dad when he died too...every one liked it...but I lost it some where...i lose every thing...shit...well I like your poem ALOT |
| On December 2nd 2006 qytSTRM Said : | |
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Very true! I like your metaphorz... |
