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My world in My Words
My head screams Drama, My heart seeks confort
Dreams haunt me of regret and they give me hope for the best
My world is how I make it, Nobody can change me of who I am
I can make a difference in somebodies life, and hurt mine in the process
But what makes me happy is seeing others happy, so the pain only stays for a while
I might say I have a bad life, but there's people in Africa that have it worse than me
My life is what I make of it, Obsticles and Maze's may get in the way but I find ways to the finish line
When people tell me wrong, I show them otherwise
So dont try to change me, It will only result in your failure
I have things going on in my life that people cant see, They just wouldnt be able to understand if I told them
But Days go on, things get better
I find out who my friends are and the friends who aren't
I find out what my purpose in life is
Relationships, I understand, come and go, Some won't last forever
But there will be a day when someone comes along and says I love you back.
and their will be a sense of confort again
Dreams haunt me of regret and they give me hope for the best
My world is how I make it, Nobody can change me of who I am
I can make a difference in somebodies life, and hurt mine in the process
But what makes me happy is seeing others happy, so the pain only stays for a while
I might say I have a bad life, but there's people in Africa that have it worse than me
My life is what I make of it, Obsticles and Maze's may get in the way but I find ways to the finish line
When people tell me wrong, I show them otherwise
So dont try to change me, It will only result in your failure
I have things going on in my life that people cant see, They just wouldnt be able to understand if I told them
But Days go on, things get better
I find out who my friends are and the friends who aren't
I find out what my purpose in life is
Relationships, I understand, come and go, Some won't last forever
But there will be a day when someone comes along and says I love you back.
and their will be a sense of confort again
| On January 11th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said : | |
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very nice poems.... but I am sure that there are people in America that have a worse life than you also.... |
| On January 11th 2008 blah2blah Said : | |
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my favorite line in this is 'Obsticles and Mazes may get in the way, but I find ways to the finish line'. amazing job and perfect word choice! |
| On January 10th 2008 dhmm Said : | |
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love this poem!!!!!!! |
| On January 10th 2008 kimmitchell91 Said : | |
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i think it was a nice poem |


