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Blurted Out

Views (350) Anger Created on 2-15-07 Flag
 

-Guilded tounges wrapped around rotten apple lies

Maggot mouth and in two weeks flies

This love note transforms into one of suicide

-Dr. Razorblade

11/26/2006

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On July 23rd 2007 stics917 Said :
stics917 dude this is just pure emotion,i like that
On April 20th 2007 yerdinodotcom Said :
yerdinodotcom ohh god.....fuck that faggot.he needs fucked up the ass,keehee. I loved it is is beautiful.
On April 10th 2007 krystalee78 Said :
krystalee78 well done.
On March 9th 2007 Ellesmidget Said :
Ellesmidget lol, ohh k, very short indeed.
On February 28th 2007 Rokynutz Said :
Rokynutz One word...DEEP!
On February 20th 2007 LQQKatME6 Said :
LQQKatME6 Beauty Full!
On February 18th 2007 himmortal Said :
himmortal DUDE this is exactly what I told my girl friend after we had sex one night thanks
On February 17th 2007 aljlslsl Said :
aljlslsl Hey pretty cool poem
On February 16th 2007 GIOOS Said :
GIOOS short and emo like the message...
On February 16th 2007 Ilovepeaches Said :
Ilovepeaches That ass hole can suck his father's dick. I really like this. It's short, sweet and to the point. I've been there in my own life and finally found hope. Great job!
On February 16th 2007 101091 Said :
101091 i like it. its deep and so different. nice job. and forget that freak that said it was terrible, its not.
On February 16th 2007 llstarll Said :
llstarll Don't listen to that stupid fuck. If he actually READ it then he would know what it means. He probably can't even write himself bacause he doesn't have anything posted at all. Continue your writing and Fuck all the people that don't like it. I like and you like so thats all that matters.
On February 15th 2007 reaganrobert Said :
reaganrobert Thats the stupidest thing I've ever heard. You talk of suicide like its a threat or cause you wear makeup and look like your father molested you as a child, you can say shit like that and think your cool, unique, dark, or whatever the hell you are posing as. Pretty fucking cool ass hole. Stop talking the talk... talk to a shrink or go get a hug.
On February 15th 2007 reaganrobert Said :
reaganrobert Thats the stupidest thing I've ever heard. You talk of suicide like its a threat or cause you wear makeup and look like your father molested you as a child, you can say shit like that and think your cool, unique, dark, or whatever the hell you are posing as. Pretty fucking cool ass hole. Stop talking the talk... talk to a shrink or go get a hug.