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Lost in Nowhere

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Where does the girl go?

I don't know where she goes

Maybe, she is lost in somewhere

Forgetting her name

Forgetting who she is

She has been sick and tired of her family to tell her a negative things about her good-lookings and other things

You don't know how much she feels pressure

You don't know she is alive

She may be invisible

Even through she is alive inside her heart

Her heart beats every second

You can't speak, hear and see her

She is all the entire time invisible

All the times, that girl is crying out of heart

All the entire time, she is letting her tears to roll down her cheeks

She has prayed in a quiet voice

Trying to be better

Even through, she doesn't know what the real her is

Tripping over the rocks

Falling down on the ground

She was moaning

Her heads looks up, and tries to get up

Looking at the beautiful red roses

When she touches those roses,

it turns into the dark, black roses

Gasping and running away from the roses

Running into the dark forests

Lost in nowhere in the forest

She doesn't know what happened to the real her

She doesn't know why happened to the real her

Crying into the river

Drowning in it

She'll try to get out of the water

Crying out of the forest for a help

Nobody can hear her voice

Do you know who is she?

That girl is me

Yes, I've felt the pain so much

My heart is about to crack open

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On July 30th 2007 wolfvalentine Said :
wolfvalentine its not a bad poem. although with some of the wording i got confused but other than that luv it wasnt bad
On July 25th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 ahh, come on! please comment and vote. what do you think of this poem?!?! pplease!
On July 20th 2007 dyingfminside Said :
dyingfminside this is a great poem!! :) read and rate mine? k thanx