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Tired Of Myself |
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Queen of Liars |
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Lost in Nowhere |
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All the Memories |
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Was I Stupid? |
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Left Out |
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I Don't Really Understand |
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Just Waiting |
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Waiting |
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Someone |
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Hate & Love |
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All Because Of You |
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Our Own World |
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Breaking Free |
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Eyes |
Lost in Nowhere
Where does the girl go?
I don't know where she goes
Maybe, she is lost in somewhere
Forgetting her name
Forgetting who she is
She has been sick and tired of her family to tell her a negative things about her good-lookings and other things
You don't know how much she feels pressure
You don't know she is alive
She may be invisible
Even through she is alive inside her heart
Her heart beats every second
You can't speak, hear and see her
She is all the entire time invisible
All the times, that girl is crying out of heart
All the entire time, she is letting her tears to roll down her cheeks
She has prayed in a quiet voice
Trying to be better
Even through, she doesn't know what the real her is
Tripping over the rocks
Falling down on the ground
She was moaning
Her heads looks up, and tries to get up
Looking at the beautiful red roses
When she touches those roses,
it turns into the dark, black roses
Gasping and running away from the roses
Running into the dark forests
Lost in nowhere in the forest
She doesn't know what happened to the real her
She doesn't know why happened to the real her
Crying into the river
Drowning in it
She'll try to get out of the water
Crying out of the forest for a help
Nobody can hear her voice
Do you know who is she?
That girl is me
Yes, I've felt the pain so much
My heart is about to crack open
| On July 30th 2007 wolfvalentine Said : | |
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its not a bad poem. although with some of the wording i got confused but other than that luv it wasnt bad |
| On July 25th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said : | |
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ahh, come on! please comment and vote. what do you think of this poem?!?! pplease! |
| On July 20th 2007 dyingfminside Said : | |
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this is a great poem!! :)
read and rate mine?
k thanx |


