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me and my bff

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Our Own World

Views (80) Anger Created on 8-14-07 Flag

I know we will have to face the problems everyday of our lives

You know how much my heart loves your heart

Your smile is always making me smile

Your laughter is always making me laugh

Your eyes are shinning on me

Your heart is warm and soft

I can't believe we've been together since February 2001

Never forgetting our first greeting

My heart never want to unconnect your heart

My eyes don't want your eyes to become a shine, sad eyes

Your tears of sorrow can come out whenever you want

But I will always let you to put yourself on my shoulder

We'll be okay in the future

Right now, we may be sad, but we will be fine

Let the darkness go away

Let the sun smiles at us

You don't want me to go alone

I don't want you to go alone, either

Many bruises on our hearts are in pain

Screaming silently

Soon, we will walk out of the darkness

Looking for the door to find

Opening the new door in the new world

Creating new world

Our own world

We keep it forever

No one can have ours

No one can enter our new door

Only for us

Our own world won't be destroyed anymore

Our hateful memories will be fade soon

Don't let us to hate each other

You are only the one who is my best friend who knows me well

Our tears will always be falling down our cheeks

Even through they won't last forever

I promise you

You promise me

Please, don't let my hand go away from your hand

Hold my hand tightly

We will be fine

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On November 7th 2008 DarkJrocker Said :
DarkJrocker awesome! i can relate to it lately...
On August 17th 2007 mathstar Said :
mathstar ahhhh goooooooooood poem.
On August 15th 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Ahh! I love it! But it kinda make me to LITTLE tear! *joy*
On August 14th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic I really like this! My computer's being stupid and it won't let me rate it, but I'll be sure to come back later to rate! =]
On August 14th 2007 wolfvalentine Said :
wolfvalentine not bad. me likee lol
On August 14th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 sorry guys i support to put joy, not angry
On August 14th 2007 DorkyBoo08 Said :
DorkyBoo08 whatcha think of this poem??? like it or not? please comment and vote. thanks.