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Bleeding to Death

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I sit in my own puddle of blood just about to die.

no one even knowing no one was even in sight.

i cryed and cryed as i sat there just ready to die.

because if the world really loved me i wouldent have commeted

suicide. as i sit in my blood bleeding to death i feel the pain and

drips in my left leg. i look at my note that i left on the table and

all that i wrote was why dont the world love me what did i ever do?

I sit there in my puddle of blood bleeding to death. asking myself is this the end or where is the rest.

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On May 8th 2008 metal4lifebaby Said :
metal4lifebaby this is pretty great. plz check out my new poems.
On December 31st 2007 RealGurl4life Said :
RealGurl4life i like it look at mine
On December 27th 2007 KaosQueen Said :
KaosQueen wow o_o this poem is really cathching good job (y) :]
On December 24th 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :
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Wow I can relate...very nice...beautifully dark.... Did this really happen or is this just a poem?